改正错误-gai zheng cuo wu

今天我去我的朋友的家。------今天我去朋友的家。
jintian wo qu wo de pengyou de jia.----jintian wo qu pengyou de jia.
Today I went to my friend's home.

我们很长期没有见面。----我们很久没有见面了。
wo men hen chang qi mei you jian mian.---wo men hen jiu mei you jian mian le.
We have not met in a long time.

我很开心见到她。
wo hen kai xin jian dao ta.
I'm very happy to see her.

讲到很多话。---和她聊了很多话
jiang dao hen duo hua.---he ta liao le hen duo hua
We talked a lot.

期望我的华语有进步。-----希望我的华语会进步的快。
qi wa wo de hua yu you jin bu.----xi wa wo de hua yu hui jin bu de kuai.
Hope my Chinese has improved.---hope my chinese will improve better

有吗，老师?----会吗?老师?
you ma, lao shi?----hui ma ? lao shi?
Has it, teacher?-----will i ? teacher?

我的朋友

今天我去我的朋友的家。
jintian wo qu wo de pengyou de jia.
Today I went to my friend's home.

我们很长期没有见面。
wo men hen chang qi mei you jian mian.
We have not met in a long time.

我很开心见到她。
wo hen kai xin jian dao ta.
I'm very happy to see her.

讲到很多话。
jiang dao hen duo hua.
We talked a lot.

期望我的华语有进步。
qi wa wo de hua yu you jin bu.
Hope my Chinese has improved.

有吗，老师?
you ma, lao shi?
Has it, teacher?

很好(that's good)Hen hao

你喜欢就好。
ni xi huan jiu hao
good to hear that u like


多点练习 就会进步的快
duo dian lian xi jiu hui jin bu de kuai
practise more,u will improve fast


我也替你高兴,感到光荣
wo ye ti ni gao xing，gan dao guang rong
I am happy for you too.Proud of you.

谢谢

谢谢老师！
xie xie lao shi
Thank you, teacher!

学华语很好玩。。。
xue hua yu hen hao wan
Learning Chinese is fun!

改正错误gai zheng cuo wu(correction)

早安！
zao an
Good Morning!

我很开心。
wo hen kai xin
I'm very happy.

今天我有很多东西着。(做)
jin tian wo you hen duo dong xi zhuo.(zuo)
Today I have many things to do.

我的华语不好。
wo de hua yu bu hau.
My Chinese isn't good.

我等老子教。(师)
wo deng lao zi jiao.(shi)
I'm waiting for my teacher to teach me.

会莱帮我。(快来)
kuai lai bang wo.
Quick, come help me.

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好好加油！！！！！
hao hao jia you
keep it up!

早安！

早安！
zao an
Good Morning!

我很开心。
wo hen kai xin
I'm very happy.

今天我有很多东西着。
jin tian wo you hen duo dong xi zhuo
Today I have many things to do.

我的华语不好。
wo de hua yu bu hau.
My Chinese isn't good.

我等老子教。
wo deng lao zi jiao.
I'm waiting for my teacher to teach me.

会莱帮我。
kuai lai bang wo.
Quick, come help me.

学华语

你们好。。。
ni men hao.
How are you?

我是玲玲。
wo shi ling ling.
I am Ling Ling.

我要学华语在这里。
wo yao xue hua yu zai zhe li.
I want to learn Chinese here.

请多多指教。
qing duo duo zhi jiao.
(Literal translation) Please guide me.
Please forgive my mistakes.